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Cute story, but what really distracted me when I was reading was the spelling and grammar errors, but nothing spell check can\'t fix. I thought that was cute how you included all those other fandoms in there. It was fun to read, and I can\'t wait to read more to see how the Scarlet-Eros-May triangle is going to end up. One more thing, \'an\' goes before a word that ss wis with a vowel. Sorry, if it sounds condescending, but it was very distracting. ^_^

Hello! I really like this fic and I think you should continue more. I was wondering about something when you wrote the Utena chapter, because you said it went with the movie. Did you listen to song from the music video of that movie? The reason why I asked is because I was and it went great with that chapter.

Keep writing! It really is great.