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to the insulting commenter:

i was raped by my boyfriend at the age of 15. anally. this is how i got my revenge. if you don\'t like it, just read something else. thanks.

YOU´RE SICK! WOMAN, I KNOW THAT YOU ARE THAT KIND OF WOMEN WHO LAUGHS WHEN SHE HEARS, THAT A WOMAN HAS BEEN RAPED OR YOU WOULD THINK" HMMM I WISH THAT COULD´VE BEEN ME" AND STARTED TO FINGER YOURSELF HARD AND CUM HARD ON YOUR OWN SICK FINGERS, YUCK!!!

PLEASE NEVER WRITE ANYTHING LIKE THIS ANYMORE, IF YOU WANNA WRITE, WRITE WITH SENSE AND A HEART.

Good story. Could you update please. Would be nice to see what happnes after the first chap. :>

poor poor jacob... :( that was good start though... hope you\'ll write more....

Please, continue this. I liked this story, although I think you should do some editing before you post. Perhaps get a beta? No offense meant, I just want to help avoiavoid those stupid spelling mistakes that tend to slip into a story when you write it. I also think that you should have described your characters a bit more before getting them in \"action\". Who areob aob and Jonathan? How did they end up as roommates? Are they in high school/college? How long have they known each other?

Jonathan being a vampire is interesting. Also it seems Jacon doesn\'t know this...

Please, write another chapter.

Amanda Lee