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for Last Night

by lostsoul

person Tomako
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s okay... Some cliche\' comments and spelling errors, but it\'s not all that bad either. ^_^ I look forward to more!
person TradewindVoyager
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Interesting little vignette. I think it would do well as part of a larger work. I like the feeling of uninhibited sexual freedom in your stories.
person Bubblegom
schedule October 31, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Hey girl, that was hot. That got me going. Mwahaha!