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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story you should continue it.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have been waiting for you to write more. It\'s a great story you have to continue
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! very suspensful and HOT!
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE NEXT CHAPTER??? SURELY THE STORY DOESNT END WITH BUT......
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is this story going to carry on? Because its very good and should develope it more.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice...
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice. Will Chrs brs be returning? one does hope
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that sooosooooooo cool! do a sequel of some sort!!!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you have written more.
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice one...very wicked...how about another chapter on what happens next...maybe a payback to him or something else...keep up the good work...gtg...bye