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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! Where did you get the idea? A few places in the story are a bit confusing and I thought unfinished but other then that it was a very istinsting story that I think very highly of. Are you going to make a sequel? I hope you do!
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, thanks for updating; can\'t wait until the next one.ealleally like the originality of your story. i\'ve seen characters and such like it before, but everything else is new. please keep it up!
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. i this is a really good story; i can\'t wait to read the rest of it. keep it up, please. this is one of those really good stories with character development, an actual plotline, and good gramar. i\'ll be checking back often.