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for The Erotic Haunting of Miriam

by Neverseenblue

person innarim
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. i love it so far. Please continue.
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story - can\'t wait to read more.
person Winstrough
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you have updated your story since the last time I read it. I really enjoy the way you write. It is very well done. You are very descriptive and at the same time not too wordy. It is a good style. Keep up the good work.

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person Jess
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is absolutely amazing! i love the plot line, i love the characters, i love the house, i love your writing style, it\'s all wonderful! dave is such a well rounded character, you can almost feel his wants and the angst over being attached to his death place for over a century and not being able to go to heaven, or hell. it\'s just, amazing. i can\'t wait for the next installment, things are finally starting to heat up!! ;o)
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and enchanting. Please continue this story. Yuo got me hook line and sinker :)
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the story is great so far! So keep up the good work and PLEASE update it soon. I know you\'d probably like some criticism of some sort to improve or change your story but so far I don\'t have any complaints and only praise. Like I said before, good job so far-I\'m enjoying the story very much-and update this soon!
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon... love it
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story! Hope you keep writing on it soon.
person Galuwen
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. Your writing is amazing. I hope that you will continue with this story. Please update.
person free spirit
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE. DOING GREAT. WONDERFUL PLOT. MORE