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Wowzers... I don't know if you still check your reviews but I thought I'd drop you a line anyways. This story shook me. It was raw and relatable. I could understand why he made the decisions he made and Sam's violent reaction was realistic despite it coming on suddenly. The way you wrote it made this one-shot feel natural and well placed. Wonderfully dark. :) Bravo!!

Simply amazing! You're summary had me thinking this was a hopeful story and yet the end was such a surprise! Great story! Maybe another chapter, on Sam's reactions or the step-fathers thoughts?

I don\'t think people realize that this really happens. I know/knew someone who went through this. It was a razor blade that did him in though. \"I\'ll always love you, Liz\" the message scrawled on a piece of paper in pen, hand writing shaky and unstable. I miss him. He was my everything. My world. And now he\'s gone all because people sometimes don\'t have souls. It makes you wish that there was something you could do to help people something you could do to make the pain stop but there never is, I know, once it happens there is no taking it back no matter how much you wish something could erase it from your mind but its\' forever there. Even to your last breath you know it. Well, written though. I wonder if they ever feel regret for what they\'ve done?

This is really good! A tad disturbing, and makes me sad, but so good! If you did think of doing more, I think this could turn into something really grand! Not that it isn\'t now, but you know what I mean. I think. If you have the time and will, please do! I\'d love to read anything you come up with!
~Mally~

This was really good, although I was a bit confused about what happened at the end...I\'ll go back and read it again; it\'s probably just a misunderstanding on my part. You should definately flesh this out and make it into something longer; I think it\'d be really good...^_^

This fic was extremely dark, disturbing, and sad. I found it to be very well written. Reading this made a tear fall from my eye, and for that this story really has to get to me. And it did. All I can say is EXCELLENT as I shed another tear.

wow i like it! Its a good short story! Sad but good. Very moving.

woah, that\'s really good! I likes al! Me!

That was deeply disturbing. very well written. Suicide is a dodgy subject within fiction, you handled it with great care,feeling and depth. I feel gutted now.