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May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story. very hot!
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was delicious. I definitely would like more.
No grammar errors that I can remember, and your writing is lovely. My only complaint is the frequency with which you use "the singer", and "the drummer." At first it's alright, but then I go "wait, which one was that again?"
No grammar errors that I can remember, and your writing is lovely. My only complaint is the frequency with which you use "the singer", and "the drummer." At first it's alright, but then I go "wait, which one was that again?"
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! I hope you decide to continue this fic. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good stuff! I like the writing and the content a lot.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this, it was so good. Great story and right now, im going to go check out more stuff by you. ^^
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update it, make it longer. for example....write how his dad would react if he found out or make one of them jealous as a new member arrives to the band. or or makde one of them a cheater and they will fight and then they will have make-up sex. yyyyaaaaayyyyyy but please write more and i will review more. see ya next time
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot...love your characters! It would be nice to see a few more stories about them; not chapters, since I think this story holds well on its own. I really find them interesting and would like to know more about them. Really great story, though! Collin is such the deviant! Thanks for a wonderful one-shot before I head off to bed! ^_^
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was some story! I would like to see what happens in the morning, but alas I cant even be sure you even check this anymore. *sigh* oh well just thought to say this is one really good story. wouldnt mind some more.
wuv peaches
wuv peaches
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Beautiful! I love stories like this. PLease continue the line. Real life is harsh enough. I enjoy the simple pelasures in life likes fis fic.
Thank you for putting asmile on my face this morning!
-Tamela
Beautiful! I love stories like this. PLease continue the line. Real life is harsh enough. I enjoy the simple pelasures in life likes fis fic.
Thank you for putting asmile on my face this morning!
-Tamela
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes contule. I soooo ooo want to know what happens next. Please, please, countule this story.