rate_review Reviews

Now this is one WONDERFUL piece of fiction. It has a PLOT, which some NC-17 stories don\'t tend to like, it has developing characters, with personalities, feelings, thoughts... it has a story, period. ^^
When reading it I had many many comments, but as I stayed up until 3 am (yes, to read this), and woke up only now- I do not remember any of them. Except the fact this is one amazing piece of fiction, yes. *Nods*
Reminded me quite a lot of other yaoi fiction, CommonAsTheRain.com has (a story of prince Hirel something, the others of pregnant boys....), and since CotR has my ultimatly-favorite-yaoi-original-fiction- you are now a favorite author as well. Hurray!
I want updates! Yes! Many of them! Angst angst angst is on the way, and we all know how yummy that is! ^_____^
Anyway, I can’t really think properly at the moment, since I just woke up, so I’ll stop babbling, and only ask: have you got an MSN messenger? Or ICQ? Seeing that you write amazing yaoi fiction, you must be a great person, ne?! (JustWokeUp logic.)
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Drop me a note, if you feel like it. My e-mail is above. =)

this is sooo wonderful! will you please please please write more soon!! *kisses* i love it! poor ceros! what will happen to him? and how will the prince react? ahhH! so exciting!!! i love you!!! *more kisses* thanx!!!

Chapter one was well done...better than anything I could have done anyway. I like this whole man/turns into a woman thing that\'s going on in this story. I haven\'t seen anything quite like this, so it\'s unique and intriguing.

Chapters 4,5, and 6 Review

i\'m a busy beaverette, what can I say? I was so eager to read what was going to happen in the next chapter that I skipped doing a few reviews.

This is all very good, but one thing that bothers me is that Ceros, the fiesty little bugger he is, will become over-feminized and lose all his sense of self. I know the whole male/female thing will have some big effect on him, but I\'m hoping his attitude will not be rendered \"whiney-pissy\" by his raging hormones or whatever it is that he\'s going through.

oh no whats going to happen????? oh sex was good though...come to think of it sex is always good:) keep up the good work. write tons and tons more. give you cookies:)

LD: *sigh* well that is nood.ood.
Karen: To say the least. Damn hormones!
LD: *snicker*
Karen: What? It It is just funny to hear you say that is all.
Karen: Poor Ceros. That is just aweful. It is a wonder his race survived at all if this is any indication of normalcy.
LD: Yeah, to be driven to sex and not being able to do the deed... must be rough.
Karen: You needn\'t make it sound so... silly.
LD: O.O I wasn\'t, I fully sympathise! Damn near impossible existance. I do feel bad for him.

OMG, that is so teasing to leave the chapter off like that, it was really good I can\'t wait to see what happens next, congradulations you now have an addicted reader. Keep writing and the lemon scene was Yummy to say the least. ;)

*scream* this is sooooooo fucking brilliant!!!!! *glomp* y goy god!!! *drool* so sexy and perrrfect and the characters are original and interesting and wonderful and love the change thing and ink tnk that ceros is awesome and the prince it definately cool in his own way... and they are both too hot for words!! i don\'t know how you write so well, but you do and i can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! *kisses* i love it i love it i love it!!!!! *more kisses* and i love you too!!! please write more soon! thank you to infinity plus one!!!! *ravish* you rock!!!!

*eyes moving to the right, eyes moving to the left* wow what is Ceros going to do. is he going to chicken out again? is the change complete? whats going to happen?????....give you cookies if you tell me......punch and?...?.......loads of cash?.....be your best friend. :)

please continue...i have so little pleasures in the world, please let this continue to be one of them........please!!!!!!!!!!!.....give you a cookie.