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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omgsh you have to update damn you!!! TT.TT waaaah.... please? i totally love it.. and i wanna see more atharva/ceros now!!! pleeze?
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeahh!!!! you finally updated!! and it soooo wonderful! but you\'re so eeeeeevil!!!!! another cliffhanger! gahhH!! *dies* but i love it and i love you and it is soooo owonderfully perfect and awesome!! please please please write more sooN! *glomp* ceros is so pretty and sweet and adorable! poor baby!!! this is so exciting! *kisses* i love it! i love you!!! please update!! *huggles* you\'re my hero!!! *more kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! *little hears float around in the air*
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! SO good! but why did you stop now? it was getting good! pleaase write more!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, interesting. so what is going to happen now? please put up the next chapter soon.
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS !!!!!!!!! UPDATE!
JA!
JA!
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UpdateUpdateUpdate!
This one is defintelly good!
Keep the chappies coming :)
*likes a lot*
This one is defintelly good!
Keep the chappies coming :)
*likes a lot*
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really good! At first I just read it cause I got bored but now I want to keep on reading non-stop! So update soon please!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God, you have such wonderful writting skill !
Is there any chapter coming after the 6th ? I would love to read them if you\'re kind enough to write and post it.
Anyway, please... keep writting ?
Is there any chapter coming after the 6th ? I would love to read them if you\'re kind enough to write and post it.
Anyway, please... keep writting ?
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First of all, you\'ve got an impressive story going here.
Aside from some gramatical issues that are easily overlooked, I only saw one small problem. Asexual, means basically, that you make yourself pregnant. An example would be worms, that don\'t require any kind of partner to reproduce. I\'m not sure of the proper term for what Ceros would become, possibly hermaphroditic, which means possessive of both sets of reproductive organs.
Keep up the good work!
Moth Darkfyre
Aside from some gramatical issues that are easily overlooked, I only saw one small problem. Asexual, means basically, that you make yourself pregnant. An example would be worms, that don\'t require any kind of partner to reproduce. I\'m not sure of the proper term for what Ceros would become, possibly hermaphroditic, which means possessive of both sets of reproductive organs.
Keep up the good work!
Moth Darkfyre
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh please please please write more!!! it has been so long!! i love this story so much! i check it all the time!! *sob* but you never update! an it is sooo exciting and you left us with a cliffy and ahHHH!!!! please please please!! *glomp* PLEASE!!! i love it sooo much!! *kiss* and i love you to! *more kisses* please? *sniff* *lick* you want to make me happy..ght?ght? *nibbles authoress\' ear* yummy... *licks lips* love you, write more... ok? *kiss*