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July 17, 2022 at 12:00 AM
I have both read and written a fair amount of psychic-powers-corrupt stories so this story looked kind of intriguing with psychokinesis as power since this is kind of unusual choice on its own. Unfortunately I after the first chapter have failed to find any obvious telekinesis scenes and the mind control employed so far is standard do-as-I-wish style of mind control. Maybe later chapters will be more interesting but so far I struggle to understand why I should care about the characters or what the thing is about the mind control that is supposed to capture my interest.