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for Timestop: The Train Ride

by SKOLL

schedule January 16, 2022 at 12:00 AM

The descriptions were very vivid!.  The thoughts and emotions seemed well thought out.
I could picture everything taking place in great detail; to the point where all my senses were stimulated (The descriptions of all of the scents, feels, visuals, and sounds were incredible)

In addition, I could appreciate his mixed emotions; admiring her, lusting for her,  and wanting her, but still despising her...I especially enjoyed that he was rough (taking advantage of being able to do things to her that he could never do under normal circumstances, but still avoiding doing anything permanent or too damaging. It was a very good balnce.

I cannot wait for more.