An outstandingly dazzling story like this is always welcome in my book
I like this. It was a surprise that Emmi's mother could knock her up but it was a good surprise.
That was fun to read. I like the worldbuilding, like how Your Little Horsis can retract their hooves when they need to grip.
Good Story, please leave it as it is. But I am wondering, what if...
What if the Breeding Barn was not a secludet seldom used barn behind the house, but a common institution of that locality? And going to the breedin barn for the first time was an event in the life of every foal?
What if Mera’s huge member did not fit in Emmi's lovel-tunnel on the first try and they had to work slowly over days to make it work? What conversations would have ensued, and how would they have tried to solve the problem?