A story with a happily ever after ending is my kind of sweet treat. The sex became increasingly hotter as the story progressed with it erotically climaxing at the beautiful end
This was already a great read but after this last chapter with his mom getting involved, the world needs a sequel!
Great story, covering all aspects, and whilst just fantasy, showed what good writing is about, and having read numerous stories of yours, is one of my all time favourites, along with Curfew.
Thanks for sharing and keep up posting. Older guy here and remember my boyhood years, lusting after certain friends wives, daughters, and hunting for my older brothers porn stash, which included a Nudist health magazine and Spic & Span.
Cheers
This was a perfect way to end the story, with mom and son both getting what ther wanted. I loved it when she said "No daughter of mine is going to grow up to be a dry-boxed prude who only spreads her legs when she wants something.” Too many girls are like that. Rachel needs to learn from Lyssa!
I like this. You write really well. Jack is an interesting and fun guy.
The story improves with each chapter, keep posting and thanks for sharing
The first chapter is a bit too short for my taste but I love this kind of story.
Can't wait to read more.
I've read some very good stories from you and some that I didn't like at all. I usually like your style, but the first chapter of Anything That Moves feels more like a sledgehammer. That the gender roles between humans and animals have been reversed here is something new, but I haven't really missed it yet. On the whole, however, it is Rape and I do not like that. I rather like the respectful stories.