Your stories are like expensive fine wine. Like the really expensive ones where you have to trade an arm and a leg just to get a single large bottle
This is the second incest story that I've read from this author. I'd say the sexual depictions are very fun, in a sexual tone, yet sexy as well. I really enjoyed the style, I don't know yet if there is a continuation to this story but sure hope so.
I loved it! You described it so good! It was like I was tghere watching them! How bout a fourth scene for after they get home and Gldys gets her triple?
I really love this story! Now this would be an amusement park worth going to! I could really see my family going there! I really can't wait to read more!
Well that was fun. Cheesy and fun.
Very nice! Well written and imaginative! Looking forward to the next chapter!
I'll be honest, I expected you to expand on this idea a while ago. That said, I'm very glad you did get around to it and I hope you write more soon.
Just finished Chapter 1: Costumes . I like the stories were the family members have a good time together. I hope there will be more chapters.
It's gonna be a shame if they came all this way and then can't get the kids to leave the bedroom the whole time. :) But kids will be kids and I'm sure they're excited to see – and experience – all the attractions along with the attractive "cast members" (or whatever this place refers to their employees as). At least all that hot action ensures all four of them will get a good night's sleep and be ready for it all.
Parents role-playing was a lot of fun too, plus a nice way to vent their anticipation for getting the real thing once the kids are old enough. Thanks for the fun introduction to the Murphy family and the preview of all the fun holiday ahead.
I love it! Paul and Gladys are so HOT!! Such a wonderful family! I can't wait for the next chapter!