rate_review Reviews

Outstanding work! Can't wait to read the upcoming chapters! I know you said the chapters will be loosely connected but I hope we get to see Amy again. Really hope we get a chapter when Warwick decides to bless a wedding by being the young bride's first kiss amongst other firsts!

Honestly, as a first fic this is better than what most people produce after years of writing. You set up scenes quite nicely and describe the actions and thoughts without it becoming a cringey self-insert fantasy. The first chapter could use a bit of tightening up when Amy recalls her past encounters with Wedwick to make it more seamless when it transitions into the present again, but overall it's a good first effort. Looking forward to more chapters.