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by GeorgeGlass

person Yahegai
schedule April 9, 2023 at 12:00 AM

What a splendid reversal on a common anime trope. Instead of the tentacle monster raping the girls, the girls were the ones that raped the tentacle monster

person Yahegai
schedule April 9, 2023 at 12:00 AM

I guess you could say the humans were the real monsters in this story

schedule April 3, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I felt genuinely bad for the monster

schedule March 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This was both hilarious and sad – a real ride. You subverted the tentacle "monster" and schoolgirl dynamic beautifully, and I really felt bad for Takito. (Though I mean, he is doing big a study project on monsters and then takes a foolish risk in the habitat of the worst kind of all – teenagers!) Also, kudos for pointing out how they all look, uhm, similar, except for the hair, and using the standard manga clique dynamic. their assorted rape styles covered the range nicely too. Miseri rounding out the Japanese noncon dynamic was a cute touch, though not as cute as how Takito talks.

Thanks for the fun yet bittersweet tale. (If only tentacle monsters could wear rubbers in rough climates.)

person JayDee
schedule March 19, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I was thinking it might go for a humorous take but this here was one hard brutal assault on that tentacle fellow. I think the details of how much it hurts to have his sensitive tentacles squeezed really drove that home, and also the fears over his being able to just get home. I was sort of hoping the spider-libarian would happen by after work and help out. I liked the obvious peer pressure amongst the girls, too, with one being reluctantly nudged into taking part. Felt more realistic than just the faceless rapist trope. Hard not to see him in human terms even though he's clearly a distinctly non-human blobby monster, and not a jerky one like the late Rush Limbaurg. Talented writing as ever!