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for The Interview

by Ava_Coral

schedule August 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM

This story has kind of classic theme so when you understand what the interview is about you can also guess where the story is headed. I mention this mostly since while I was reading the first three chapters I could not help wondering.why the lead person seems cluesless about what is happening. Possbily she could be trying to hide her suspicions in a interview situation...but still.

Another thing that I found odd was that the name of the lead person is never mentioned. I cannot tell if the interview is meant to break the fourth wall and have her talk to reader or if an unknown in story person is making the interview but we are not geting to hear the actual questions.

All in all this story felt like a promising start, keep the good work.

schedule August 17, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 2- Pretty amazing I can tell it's getting more interesting!

schedule August 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I can't wait to see what's next