This is really good! Great battle and even better orgy!
The stories in this anthology is quite fascinating and intriguing to read
Hot and exciting! I love the intimate nature of this family and the power they derive from it!
Review of Sumaya and Aleem: This is really good! The entire scene between Sumaya and Aleem is so very beautiful! You have described the ultimate, most beautiful love between a mother and son! I actually had tears in my eyes! I want more!
I really liked the sexual interplay between the two girls. It was well detailed and very realistic. I'm confused, though, about who "them" are.
Any chance of giving a newbie writer some pointers? This was a good collection so far...
(First story)
ok, I want to apologize about reviewing this so late. I absolutely LOVE this idea. And this first story was HOT!
The whole idea is hot. Magic and arcane abilities tied to a libido beyond any human mortal. And unlike other magic stories where sex is looked down upon and people are forced to quash their blazing libidos, here it's something to be celebrated and embraced as soon as possible! Love it!
I loved the idea for the toy shop, and now I really want to see the aunt and the toy shop owner go at it lol.
And after reading that you envisioned Christopher Lee as the shop owner, I can see it now as well. But at first, I was envisioning the toy shop owner from that one episode of Dexters Lab where Dexter and Dee Dee get stuck together with a Chinese Finger trap lol
Cant wait for more!
Joma
Ramona
Wow, another really fresh idea! That actually makes a lot of sense as to why kids will just hate on each other when they are young.
Reading this brought up so vivid memories of my own kindergarten class room for the setting, though I envisioned Ramona herself as the mom from "for the price of one" lol
Cant wait for what's next!
Joma
This was beautiful. The description of Todd and Kimmy's lovemaking was exceptionally well done.
This was different. I like the way you describe Sofia's sexual explorations using her powers. One of the biggest failings of our society is the denial of the sexual nature of the young. We humans are sexual creatures from the moment we are born and it is unfair to deny that aspect of humanity simply because of one's age. Kudos to you and your work.