Thanks your kind review Thundercloud. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
The title is weak, I agree. To be honest I only had the core of the first chapter as a vague idea when I first started writing so I didn't know what to call it. It doesn't mean anything other than reference to the first sentence.
I don't get the title of this story...why such a brilliant story would have such a title beats me. A quick google tells me there is a John Cleese memoir with similar name...not that this explains anything.
Over to the important thing...I found this story a great read. The characters and their reactions feel believable and the action sequences might be a bit over the top for a "mundane" story but they bring some good tension to the story.
As for the sexual aspect there is a great gradual build up with lots of teasing towards the full sex scene towards ends of the story. Please ignore the title of the story and read it yourself.
An update! Getting even better!
This is getting good! Please update!