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for For the Price of One

by GeorgeGlass

schedule May 16, 2020 at 12:00 AM

(1-5) 

This is a fun bit of fantasy made even more exciting by how dangerously bold Ramón is being. After all, even if Serena had an exhibitionism fetish (even just in loudness) it was a dangerous stretch to assume that it was Maya she wanted to reach, as opposed to getting her neighbors riled up. I guess “Fortune favors the bold!”*

Serena's "pushy passiveness" is intriguing, but I think Ramón's thoughts about how being told to do things also gives her some room for cognitive bias about her daughter being exposed and molested, even by her own hand, even as she steers things along. It seems to work well for both of them. Let's just hope she's not also using that nanny-cam for "insurance" in case they get busted, though their romp while watching Maya's private explorations was pretty hot. ("Clitflix and Thrill") So it doesn't seem that Serena has a shy streak since she's rather bold and flirty in normal circumstances, and Maya's shyness seems to be very natural for her age as well. 

So far, so delicious. As they bring Maya into more of their sexy games let's see how far Ramón can 😎 push it. Thanks.

BTW, on Day 43 Ramón writes that he'd had Serena and Maya over to his place, but after pulling up a movie for Maya he and Serena went into "Serena's bedroom"; then on Day 56 he mentions that he has a studio apartment. [Rick and Morty ref omitted.]

 * …though Horrifically Nasty Death is quite fond of them too.

schedule May 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

You have to finish this!

schedule May 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

You have to finish this!

schedule May 8, 2020 at 12:00 AM

For chapter 5

 

Another amazing chapter! One of the hottest blows jobs I've read. 

schedule May 7, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Encore! *Waves Lighter*

person Simi
schedule April 14, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Im such a huge fan of your work, im loving this story so much so far!maybe you could include some feet stuff, would love to read about her small feet doing some work 

schedule March 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Another good chapter! Things are definitely moving forward. Of course he is going to end up fucking Maya. How could he not?! Maybe mommy will buy a special little toy for her daughter, to help prepare her for something bigger than that tiny little finger. Can't wait to see what these naughty adults are going to do next. 

schedule February 11, 2020 at 12:00 AM

This new story is off to a good start. I'm on the edge of my seat with each new chapter, not knowing how far the new 'daddy/man of the house' is going to take things and he keeps surprising me. That guy has a lot of patience and self-control. After reading this second chapter and seeing how Serena enjoyed her daughter's hand on her tit, I'm wondering if she's going to try anything when she goes to tuck her daughter in bed after the date. Maybe her daughter needs a little milk? =P  Looking forward to the next chapter. I've got a million scenarios running through my head and I can't wait to see what Mister has in mind for next time. I'm hoping Maya will continue to be receptive. She's going to learn so much at such a young age! =)

schedule February 10, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Read the first two chapters. Great work! Super hot