This story was as sexily hot as a deliciously devilish sweet cream pie. In other words this story was really sweet for my eyes to feast on
Never stop being yourself GeorgeGlass regardless of what others say because by being yourself is what makes your erotically hot and fascinating stories so good
This is the Citizen Kane of degenerate porn fiction.
I just saw your Donkey man story, You Get What You Pay For, and then I reread this.
I know I gushed over this before, but it really is amazing.
I desperately want to see a sequel to this please! Maybe they all live in a house and we see them a few years later. I would love a take on how little Maya is growing. (Only in fantasy is this fun, I definitely don't expect these relationships to lead to healthy development in the real world.)
However, now there's a sweet little addition to the family, and this time Serena wants to start their new daughter's training early.
Here's a title for you:
Buy Two Get One Free
Holy Hell!
So this is where you keep your top-of-the-shelf, premium vintages.
This was great and so deliciously wrong. I liked the peppering of Spanish words and general tone. My only change would be referring to the position with "doggy" instead of "dog" to cute-ify the language. Gotta use age-appropriate kiddie language after all.
I guess my fantasies skew more posessive since making Maya a little putita was hot, but I hope she is only a slut for Daddy.
Great stuff George.
God damn!
This is great! Little Maya is becoming a wonderful little slut! I love this story!
The story came to a very nice end after coming inside two very nice ends. Very hot action and sweet little ending as they plan to move someplace quieter (or at least where they're not likely to be overheard during their torrid mommy-daughter three-ways). I do have to wonder how this will affect Maya and how they'll keep her from talking about her debaucherous home life with other kids, teachers, etc. (Maybe they should move to Fogbank's fictional city of Hotwater where all the families love one-another totally.
Thanks again for a very daring & delightful tale of the best score ever.
The newest chapter is amazing! The way you write is so captivating! Have you ever considered writing a story with ladyfreelove? You guys are my two favorite authors and I would love to see what both of you guys come up with!
Chapter 6
Great to see that Ramón finally got his ultimate wish, with a nice bit of flair with his planning & execution. Of course Serena's reaction and reinforcement amplified it all beautifully as she charged herself up for a good pounding as well. Then Maya taking the initiative later was a very pleasant surprise indeed, and clearly she was deep into the whole thing (the thing being deep in her hole) or Serena's interjection probably would have caused her to pause. Seems like she may be picking up a bit of assertiveness along with the training. The fun has been doubled!
I must admit, while listening there was a point where I started to imagine Ramón's diary was actually being read into the court records or something. Normally I'd brush it off as one of my silly random thoughts but for some reason I can't shake it off. Probably just me.
Thanks for another rousing chapter of adventures in double-dipping double-dating. :)
Excellent! This is really good! Maya's ambivalence the first time Ramon takes her his so realistic! So is her newly ignited libido when she intitiates the second round! This chapter is so satisfying on several levels! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!