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December 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM
A very hot story you have written with the reader getting look of short span of time with characters that feel very real.
The casual cruelty of the so called friends of Haylee made me cringe as it reminded me of people I rather forgot. The good part with that is that it worked great as background for the final encounter by the pool feel more meaningful that it would have been if they just hooked up when they encountered eact other.
Keep the good work!