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for Trust the Dead

by PyTerato

schedule August 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Good and dark start as usual. Love the profanity that ladens your stories, makes the characters feel more grounded. More human. Mannie seems a good character to follow, but I'm unsure about Adam as it stands. He seems... very stalkery. We shall see won't we?

That ending was good. Love that dread when you call 911 and there's no response. I know it's slightly tropey, but damn is it dread inducing. Especially in the characters. Sure fire way to say "Shit has hit the damn fan". 

Looking forward to seeing more from this one. Looks like its gunna be a gory one too.

person Anonymous
schedule July 21, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This started off good ! Can't wait for the next chapter.