rate_review Reviews

Getting the "burp kink" worked in was almost a bit of a stretch, but you made even that work.  I would actually be interested in reading "Chapter Two," never mind that this was a one-shot.  Brilliant writing.

Wow

Well...  Wasn't sure what to expect from the two prompts, but I have to say, I wasn't expecting that.  I loved the tiny details, like the wind billowing in the sails catching Itzcali's attention.  And I have to admit the burping sex was...  interesting because of the hilarity of it mixed with the seriousness.  All in all, recommended.  Well done as always. :)