Cthulu and you
a story about a troubled booty call list. =p
Loving the build up.
The cult leader looked to his cabal.
"For the last time, The necronomicon is not a sex aid."
And to his lasting shame his entire flock replied.
"Not with that attitude its not."
Before they strapped him to the sacrificial alter and the orgy commenced.
Well you certainly captured the fresh out of prison feelin with Liam. It's a few little things here and there that sell it. Keep that up.
The build up to the sex was pretty good, building that sexual tension right from the get go of Chapter 2. Which is great for an erotica tale. The sex itself was good as well, for those fans of M/M.
Overall I'm very curious to see where and how this goes. It'll be a fun ride if your previous work is anything to go by. My only concern at the moment is that Liam turns out to be a gay shark. As i always letting people know how gay he is, to the point it consumes his character. I know it was good to set up that conflict with the father right out of the gates, and it's nice not to mince words, just one thing to watch for.
Cloudy with a chance of tentacles. =p
I enjoy the slow burn of got going. <3