I’m really enjoying the story so far and I must say it certainly doesn’t read like English isn’t your native tongue so congrats on that accomplishment.
Wow. I am so goddamn into this story. Your writing style is really clean and unhurried (well, not the content - that's pretty damn filthy, and I love that), and I'm a sucker for a drawn-out tease. Turok is awesome. I love that he's harsh and dominant but not completely inhuman, that he cares at least a tiny bit about Anyo's feelings (at least enough to feel like a bit of a dick at one point). Anyo is great too, the perfect mix of helpless and defiant. I also like how you haven't gone into excruciating detail describing them, just enough to give a sense of them and then let the reader's mind do the rest. I don't know how plot heavy you intend it to be but if therre is going to be plot outside of the sexual dynamics I'm having fun picking up on tiny details and speculating where they're going to lead. If there won't be much plot, well, my brain is just weird I guess. I'm very much looking forward to your next chapters. Excellent work! And welcome to AFF, I hope you stick around.