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for Double, Oh Nothing

by bobbogeo

person Anonymous
schedule May 30, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Oh I am loving this! Please update soon!

person Anonymous
schedule May 28, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Daaang... Nathan was getting so close to freedom! I hope that Hunter gives him back school at least; maybe with conditions? However, WHY THE HECK is Nathan still hanging on to his boyfriend after all this time?!? I never liked the bf. Tyler was better then him IMO. That kid was emotionally frustrating and a dick for ignoring Nathan. . .

I really want to get some background on Hunters job. Obviously he does dirty work, like a hitman or govt something. It'd be cool if we could find out some info there. This chapter was really good. When Hunter pretended to be selling Nathan I felt very emotional. That part was written out very well. I could feel Nathan's relief when Hunter said he was faking. 😆

person brubu
schedule May 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Thats awesomeeeeee!!! its pure gold, please keep writing it, I'll be waiting for the next chapters :)

person Anonymous
schedule May 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I think this was a good chapter. Hunter showed a little compassion waiting for Nathan to be kind of comfortable. It wouldn't be in his nature to completely bend over backwards obviously. But id like to see more of that side from Hubter periodically.

person Hell
schedule April 29, 2019 at 12:00 AM
person Mbh
schedule April 29, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I fucking hate Hunter. He‘s an abusive piece of shit -_-

I don‘t know if I should be mad or feel sorry for Nathan for becoming obsessed with Hunter..How is he gonna end up in a good relationship like this? Why can‘t there be someone who can, I dunno fill Nathan kinks but still treats him right? Aaaagh! I‘m pissed >_>

person Meid
schedule April 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I‘m sure hunter likes it when Nathan is not always obedient lol 

I just hope everything will get better for Nathan.

person Kael
schedule April 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I know hunters and Nathan’s relationship is unhealthy but damn this covers all my kinks xD That poo part was too much tho. Those bullies should drop dead or  get fuc*** raped -__-

person Wow
schedule April 1, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I just wanted to say that I am one of those readers who never leave a review even I’m absolutely in love with the story. I don’t know why, but for some reason this story, which I love, compelled me to do so. I’m absolutely loving it but I do hope that Nathan is soon taken care of because a sad ending would be so painful. LoL 

schedule April 1, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Keep it up! One more person reading in silence, keep it up!