This is so unsettling, but in a good way. Nathan needs a win though. I'm still hoping for a happy ending but seriously what's going on. I am nervous.
Oh man. What a wicked evil story. But so good. Chapter 25 would make a perfect ending, but I am begging you not to... I want to know more about how Nathan's life as pet continues. Now that he has accepted being owned, Hunter has to find a new, darker, lower level to guide Nathan to, so that Nathan can struggle and protest again and Hunter has a new goal to drive Nathan towards... And tbh I want to see Nathan brought even lower, too... what is his real limit? Is there any? Also, I really want to see Nathan interact with the other kids. I want to see them hate on him; but maybe he can befriend one anyway? What are teir stories? Could he be turned into a "traitor" and maybe help the other men by teaching the kids to surrender? That woud be an awesome new conflict for him - he might want to help them, but what is the right help? Try to free them or help them accept the inevitable so they can find a dark, sick happiness in their misery?
Anyway, thanks for writing this one. So far it's been wild, and if this is the end, it's been an excellent one!
That was hot
Just binge read the whole thing, fucking love this. You're feeding my vices so well dear author <3 I absolutely love Nathan and Hunter but damn, did Hunter have to waste all those brownies :'( I'm so hungry rn and got triggered when he did that lol wonder if I can find some brownies in my bedside drawers too
Will defo share a more detailed review when I have time but nw I gotta sleep. Also, either Hunter is pretending to be a kidnapper so that he can get em or this story is taking a darker route and he's actually a bad guy. Either way it seems poor little mouse is too far gone for him
This was so wonderfully dirty, I just love it!!
I am very curious to see where this goes.
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Holy cow...
It's a really good chapter. Hunter is such a child lmao, but I can see why he thinks Nathan is perfect for him. It's all about balance I guess. The age difference still throws me a little bit off but I'm trying not to think too much about it.
I kind of miss Kyle's and Nathan's friendship, I'm glad he is still in the picture. Also, I see:
"Similar to if he had written a fictional story and people posted pleasant reviews for it. Not that he would ever ask for something like that..."
;) <3
I love this story!!! Hunter is a unique guy, but he's smart and he knows what Nathan needs. Together they were so perfect!! I LOVE THIS, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!
Ohhh hunter is evil....
The killing and the brownies.