I love this story! I can't wait to read more. I like the dynamic between Jaevin and Eugene, steamy and complex since he is a minor. I also like the dialogue of Jaevin you are really writing to the minority culture and biracial dynamic I hear and see. Kudos for that.
I have a feeling Eugene is more than he claims to be. I also can't wait until Jaevin has to go on his mission.
Keep up the great work.
FYI I logged in just to give you a review lol.
I'm really loving how the story going!
Oh ^/////^ I made this account to tell you you're doing a great job. The story its kinda like beauty & the beast in a way!! good luck in future updates!!!
Good luck on your exams n stuff, I know I can't wait for this semester to be over already!!
As for chapter 14, I just love the dialogue so much. Lol when his friend Kale said "Sorry Jay. He practically ya daddy" then dipped. And now Jaevin gotta worry about this Letrale guy, he just can't catch a break! Somebody really needa clown this Letrale guy for being named Letrale lmao. Thanks for the update!
I die everytime there is a sexual interaction between Detective Yui, who we now know is named EUGENE, and Jaevin. I love them, chapter 12 had me grinning like a maniac the whole time! On a side note, I wonder what kind of person the target is though, I'm guessing extremely dangerous lol.
I just had to make an account so I could comment and tell you that I'm really enjoying this story, it's so exciting to read. Love the way you write, I can picture what's happening perfectly in my head! Also, Detective Yui is a hot man haha.
Detective Yui teaching Jaevin the ways of seducing men, wow wow wow I cannot wait to see that! Really loving the flow of this story.
I love this! This is really really good, love the characters already. Thanks for sharing this story, I'll definitely be reading every update!