Please correct your disclaimer.
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Different tack with part 3. You don't expect to see a word like ophibiophobiac in a story like this I guess. That blowjob in the restroom was fucking hot!
It's been a while since I read this kind of content. It's pretty brutal and imaginative. Poor old Bea with her accidental head injury! I guess it's got pretty decent character development with Charlie going from the fairly worthless slob to finding motivation in life. A lot of very visceral detail on the tortures for Wanda - and just kept going!
I guess Charlie's not done yet?