Chapter 13 review/thoughts! (spoilers!)
The swinger couple were fun! I was kinda surprised that the woman was straight in this thing – I guess it had to happen :p – but then she definitely seemed to get caught by something from the ol’ magic dildo. Maria getting diddled with the dildo and a cock inside her was pretty hot, and she got to get off. Also a nice scene with both of them and the guy. ““Hon, I want to nut in her.” That’s some nice married couple communication!
The sensory deprivation bondage is a great mental image – the landlord certainly seemed to enjoy it for the later scene!
For the coffee and buns with Ronja’s father/stepmother, I wasn’t sure why Carol was so annoyed with it – and the slight awkwardness with John, is it meant to imply John’s tried it on with Carol too, under ghost possession? I can’t imagine the ghost is against a little stepmilf action? Hell of a spanking, I couldn’t work it out until Ronja did either – but, yeah, made sense! Gotta respect the house rules when moving into shared accommodation :D
The landlord scene was fucking great – he still seems like a pretty nice guy, yeah, he’s got a kink but he’s not unreasonable about it. He even wants to do right by his other tenants although you can see he’s kind of easy to tempt with that bondage sex. That was pretty hot though!
That’s Mark’s first time with Maria, right? I don’t think he had a go with her before? It was quite cool the way they had that set up, and Ronja’s side angle in really enjoying her time with the good boy felt like she’s got less control with him than any of the actual guys – she really couldn’t wait to get down there on her knees could she? I guess all part of the plan with the cameras going for the ghost?
The last scene, with the neighbour out for a run was also fun! I liked the way she seduced him into it and got even more excited to be watched while they were fucking. Very hot! One thing, it mentions “a man wearing a costume.” As they’re by cliffs I took that to mean a swim/bathing costume of some sort (either shorts or speedo briefs), but wasn’t sure if it was another type? – Is the area known for cosplayers or something?
Overall another good long chapter, I think my favorite bit for this one was Maria getting off with the dildo and the man, and then him coming inside her with the wife watching! Dunno why, just really appealed.
Chapter 12 review/thoughts/the odd spoiler!
Just in general, it’s great they’re really communicatingnow. Sharing the knowledge about everything, or nearly everything – hard totalk hypno triggers if you might trigger them I guess – but it adds to showinghow close they are in their shared adversity. Another good chapter!
It’s kind of sweet that after all this time Ronja’s goingpublic with their relationship. Two girls, in love, with a few obstacles toovercome… Wasn’t sure if it was a meangirls bully type situation there at the start, or if at least one of themrather fancied having a dominatrix drag her bound and half naked around inpublic. Maybe she should go speak to the more dominant Maria… hey, interestedfellow student! Fresh meat for the hypno videos?
I liked Maria’s thought process over staying – yes, shemight have to bang a ghost possessed guy, but on the one hand she isn’t goingto leave her girlfriend to face it alone, and on the other she gets more sexwith her gf. It felt like a making the best of a bad situation!
That was a fun little sex scene! I liked how ghost-John wasn’tthere to start but pretty much had to go get involved, and after getting hisdick sucked let the girls play. Also, nice mix of different accessories – the clamps,beads and one of those big ol’ vibrators. I liked how they were ready to just carryon fucking each other until he had to order them to go back to making dinner. Thosetwo really do love each other!
>Kungsholmens Glassfabrik on Pipersgatan Street.
> Piperska Muren garden
Googled them, as with the venue in last chapter. It reallyadds something to be able to see some of these real places, and imagine thecharacters there. Stories set in a lot of real world places I have a good ideafrom film, or TV, or even visiting, but here I’d be going of description andfilling the blanks.
That’s a great looking garden.
On the next bondage sex bit – wow, that was a buncha spanking!I liked the position with John, it’s like the ghost has been watching pornosand learning stuff to try. Never mind bad toy, though, that’s bad mistressleaving her sub unattended in that kind of bondage. Could have had some seriousissues with blood flow and muscle damage in those arms! Luckily, it’s just afantasy story and all ok : )
I’d say my favourite scene in this one though was the lastone, with Maria. Something about the way she was so obviously in physicallybetter shape – actually having to order her to prevent to be overpowered. She’sgot some steel, that girl.
Chapter 11 spoilers in review below!
More details and comments – I thought about when reading it-
I liked the idea of Maria suddenly getting the magical hornyfeeling again, the ‘wave of desire,’ only to have her mother demand that sheremembers to clean the window. Poor girl’s about ready to “clean” them by bendingbackwards and squirting at them… but it’sanother way of showing the hypno element threaded throughout the story with herbody just responding to the command. Sort of unintentional (on her mother’spart) orgasm denial there, even before she’s had a chance to masturbate.
Felt like some more character progress for Ronja with the remoteviewing masturbation session on Maria – which was hot! – because she’s takingthe more dominant role [kind of foreshadowing of her costume for the party!],and also starting to ask herself why she’d even resist with everything she’ddone. Is it the hypno suggestion directly or is her mind sort of changing toher circumstances? Also, since it’s the ghost in John’s body fucking her, is itstill the incest aspect of it making her come again when she thinks back to it,or more hypno suggestion that she should come when she thinks about herself onthe site? Sorry if some of this was made clear, I think I’m getting it andmaybe just over thinking😊
…also Maria having to explain to her mother what all thenoise was. That’s a funny image. Good on Mother for being supportive and suggestingshe have her girlfriend over. Unless, you know, she just thinks it will be morepeaceful if Maria’s mouth is stuffed with bush.
…ok, sheet of linen ghost Maria would be hot though. You gotpotential for someone else under the sheet too… Ok, just me then…heh
Great little scene with the blowjob and ass-play – I liked thatthe ghost actually let her pick what she wanted to stick up there, then usedthe spoon anyway. Wooden spoon spanking isn’t super uncommon, and it’s easy toenvisage.
“18th-century house Kristinehovs Malmgård” – I googled it tosee if it was a real place. Looks like a nice place. Bit of character there!
Heh, more blackmailers. It’s starting to feel like you can’ttrust anybody in Stockholm! I kid, I kid.
I thought when she got juiced up from “John” with the magic,it was to get her in the mood for them, so it was interesting when they stilljust weren’t doing it for her, the way they just aren’t sexy enough for her, soshe just concentrates on getting ‘em off. Wasn’t how I saw it going, butworked!
Haha! Holy shit, badass dominatrix Ronja! That was cool.These little victories, like with the landlord over Mikaela in the last part,they really help to boost the tone of the parts and show something different.
That last section was really hot, walking Maria home inbondage and screwing her, while Maria’s thinking about her term to dominateback! Really good stuff. The mental image of Maria being walked through theparty like that is powerful.
Last line – Ronja’s been knocked up? Ghost getting itself anew body?
Fingers crossed Iwill be on to chapter 12 to read more quickly.
Chapter 10. Spoilers in review below!
Well, it’s been 3 and a half years since I got back to havea look, but within the first few words it was all flooding back. The assholeghost! Man, I hope he gets his some day.
I enjoyed the opening scene, Ronja sort of having controlfor a second with her pretend hypno acting and imagining Maria, only to kind ofget it turned on her as “John” just used her face and left her lying there. Theghost actually wanting the masturbation on the table was an amusing escalation.I guess it won’t be catching up on the morning papers!
Then another Mark and dog part! I know Ronja’s had to dosome messed up things to get by, but actually making her do the math study? Ikid, actually her being naked around the blind guy and the dog is hot. Heh, kindashot himself in the foot by not getting her off first, didn’t he? So then shegoes for the dog. That whole decision to just be unfaithful with too cocks feltlike self justification because she’s more into the dog than she wants toadmit.
Oh, right Mikaela! I’d forgotten about her, actually. Still,seems like a smart move from Maria to go for mutually assured destructionthreat to end the blackmail. If it doesn’t somehow go wrong or get turnedagainst her, I mean Maria and Ronja are normally so lucky! I actually laughedout loud at the exchange
“Maria beamed at Mikaela as she sent the recorded voicemessage. “I sent it now. No point of my phone suffering an accident.”
“You look peachy for somebody that will get fucked by a malecock soon,” Mikaela said.”
Yeah, the sarcasm really drips off there.
The scene with Frank, well, he was pretty keen not to befucking a 16 year old. That’s gotta make him the most decent guy so far. Also,second laugh out loud was him getting one over Mikaela at least for now. Nobodybeats the landlord!
…and the unsolicited dick pic ending. Cliffhanger orcockhanger?
These long detailed chapters take some time to get through,but I hope to read and review 11 before long too!
Was a fan of this on sexstories.com, glad to have found it again and glad it's continued
I have just started reading Chapter 1 after seeing your promotion on the forum. So far, the story is very well written and interesting. I put it on my "recommended reading" and "reading now" lists so I don't lose it. I definately plant to read the entire thing through, at least as far as you have it written.
I haven't visited Sweden. However, your background descriptions so far are quite good, and help me envision that I am in Stockholm while reading your story.
Twisted but so hot
Chapter 9! It’s been great fun getting in with the characters. I’d say my favourite sex scene was the one she watched on the computer screen from when she was in the trance, but going for that washing machine trope was pretty hot for all that seeing it appear made me laugh some. There seemed to be an issue with the formatting with a few lines somehow splitting down onto the next line, but I don’t know if that’s just a firefox thing or if it shows for you too – might be worth checking, example:
Getting everything inside the washing machine with one hand was difficult. Ronja struggled with it until she realized that she never attached the spreader bar to her neck. If she bent her neck forward,
she could stretch her arms, so she got the bar connecting her hands in front of her.
Just throwing it out there is it could be a pretty quick fix. The only other thing that really stuck out for me was “straight jacket” – I’m just more used to seeing it as straitjacket so it jarred a little. Others might say different!
SPOILER THOUGHTS –
I was thinking that it felt really realistic for her to wake up and comment on how sleeping in the bondage left her aching, and then it felt like foreshadowing too when it turned out John both railed and fisted her while in the trance. No wonder she woke up so sore with that kinda rough stuff! Still cute seeing her interactions with Maria, her one true love tho’! Per above, was really hot to see her masturbating first to herself in the bondage and then the description of John fucking and fisting her. Is all the raw sex the ghost’s attempt to breed a new body? Good thing she doesn’t get puppies really…
Maria’s subplot with agreeing to make the porno for Mikaela – I hope she is able to get one over the blackmailer. I mean, the ghost is a supernatural pervert. Those dead guys are probably morally dubious anyway, but Mikaela’s human and supposed to be in a position of trust. Am interested to see what Maria comes up with for her though!
So… so… Julia’s reaction. Does she fancy some of dat Ronja? Is one of the reasons she does very little in the way of sex with guys, and just flirts etc for drinks’n’ that because she’s really not that interested in them? I guess the costume party is her chance? I can’t imagine the ghost would object? :D You do have ghosty keen for Ronja going after all. I also liked how Mark turning up was a chance for Ronja to remember fucking the dog, and the later mention about how apart from the surprise buttsex she was pretty fucking happy with the feel of it all. She’s an animal lover, it’s all hot the way you write it!
John’s fiancée fantasy – it actually sounds like it’s kind of wholesome! Marriage and romance in the air! But it’s totally perverted, so is all good. I thought it was cool and funny the way the character made Ronja giggle so much. Slapping and playing with her ass/pussy when she was preparing was a cool touch, and I liked the messy feeding bit, too.
Straight up laughed out loud when Ronja got herself genuinely caught in the washing machine and John literally called out the trope, but then when he took advantage of it it was actually really hot and not a joke, because of the hypnotism and her being genuinely trapped rather than the fake stuck in version.
The fuck on the bed, with her coming really hard, is still a strong scene and image, and him rawdogging his step-sister again! It is good stuff, I just liked the first two better. And then the look of the ghost in John, suggesting rather than needing a new body, he’s maybe slowly getting John’s?
Anyway, great part!
Chapter 8 – spoiler warnings for review!
Whoo! You’re on a roll lately. Back to pre-pandemic Stockholm we go. And the cliffhanger of who has caught them is revealed! I’m glad I didn’t have a bet on The Scooby Gang on vacation. In many ways they’re lucky it wasn’t an American government building – at least they didn’t get shot! I did half wonder If it was gonna turn into a guards on girls gangbang but they turned out to be honest joes! Good on ‘em,
Genuinely can’t tell if the ghost does find the police involvement an issue or just used it to get more out of Ronja. Now I start worrying about Maria reading the site and getting upset with Ronja – I guess Ronja could always claim it was just her fantasy tho? Ghost’s method of scaring the police into crashing was pretty effective, and that description of him panicking the chasing cop into firing wildly was cool! I think it’s partly that we just get the sound effects so it’s more atmospheric if that makes sense.
That one line about Ronja thinking of squeezing Maria into her clothes. Heh. She ain’t so innocent that Ronja girl :p
Maria’s self examination while waiting was hot – something about that line of remembering the fingers in her ass. She has a new interest! Totally makes sense she’d be keen on taking a shower too. Running around naked and the rest of the evening’s activities got her grubby!
Getting it from Maria’s POV so we can’t hear the ghost talking to Maria works well. That awkwardness over the mirror and then the feeling that the ghost is probably suggesting some perverted things, but Maria’s up for it an spreading herself! It was also really hot the way it started with Ronja masturbating under her skirt as Maria watched. Super sexy.
Then I did laugh a little at Maria’s reaction to just how many sex toys Ronja had. It’s like her girlfriend had levelled up in the perversion – and this is while she has her hypnotised and is looking for something to stick in her ass! Fucking loved how she didn’t forget her desire for a shower either. Sorts Ronja out in the bondage, goes and has that damn shower! That’ll teach Ronja to just give her a blanket when she needs to get clean :D
The fuck session was also really hot. The lesbian stuff in this story has been great overall. When Ronja finally gets to lick, and using the mirror to watch them fucking… and I loved that reasoning for leaving Ronja in the straitjacket.
Really enjoyed part 8!
It continues! Was really happy to see another part of this one, too. It really didn’t take long to get back into Ronja’s world, and I still feel a lot of sympathy for her. Took me a good time to read, but that length means you fit in much more events and detail, and it’s good stuff! All of the sexual content was just hot as heck, with all of the variety this story has had!
SPOILERY REVIEW BELOW. Warning. Spoilers.
I thought this was going to be the hottest scene until I got to the haunted building near the end – Ronja in full dog cosplay mode is incredibly hot, and John is convinced she’s into it all because of the notes and awkward situations so he doesn’t come across as an especially bad guy. Ronja’s reaction while watching her own porno was fuckin’ sexy – it’s definitely unclear how much of it is hypno triggers and how much is her own psychology. I thought it was funny her saying the note was a joke only for it to have been a “help with math” note – and it was pretty awesome that the hypnotic state actually allowed her to retain the statistics knowledge and scrape a pass.
Maria’s playing with herself was fun, but it really kicked off when she was on the phone to Ronja – I really liked their non-pervy interractions as well, although it was extra sexy when Ronja was getting a little too frisky in public.
The original ghost’s “You are in quite a mess my little slave. Entering a haunted place without the mirror with you. The distance is too large so I cannot compete with the horny spirit that has captured you. You are on your own for now,” actually made me laugh – mostly because I was wondering just how he’d compete if the mirror was there, “Back off, Casper! This is my sex slave! You can have Julia, Jonathan isn’t bothered…” Then with John apparently hearing that blowing in her mouth towards the end, I wondered if it was the same ghost somehow manifested in the haunted spot from the mirror. Power growing with time and everything.
And As I mentioned earlier the scene with this ghost was really hot – very inventive ghost sex, I especially liked how it got the fisting and fingering going, and then that ghostly oral, and Maria’s not-serious complaint! Quite the cliffhanger at the end though. Is it Mikaela for more blackmail?
The last scene… the ghost be getting a hold over John as a ‘sexual muse’ – it is just able to talk to him or does it extend some control? Random thought - If he likes to look at a reflected cock as he’s jerking does he have some bi-tendencies?
Heck of a good chapter!