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by GeorgeGlass

person JayDee
schedule July 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Part 3 –

That was pretty fuckin’ furry. I liked it! The way you did the dialogue with the sisters was cool, definitely had a different-from-usual-human feel to it, which makes sense with their nature. I really liked their playfulness during the sex, too, with that whole trying to get to their turn idea.

That Cottontail Special, well, I don’t think I can recall reading anything quite like that in 20+ years of internet porn. Really well executed and the money shot build up was hot as hell.

Final thought was the ending... holy shit! Gonna be interesting to see where that goes :D

 

person JayDee
schedule March 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

(Possible spoilers in review) Part 2 was a lot of fun! The whole exhibitionist aspect really does make it hotter as he’s fucking Aliss. Which is amazing because it was already pretty hot as he got his sister coming. It was pretty amusing how thoroughly he changed Rose’s mind- and again, also hot the way he took the time to find out what she liked best with being touched before getting on with fucking her. Also smiled a bit at Philo’s work ethic comment.

Outside the sex, in the real world, it was just kind of sweet how the family had their games night and memories of the Dad still, and the completely non-sexual way he comforts his younger sister during the storm.

I think I’ll have to miss the Lady Angel chapter when it inevitably arrives – bit too young there for me (not a criticism, just personal taste!)

schedule March 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Woohoo!!!! Chapter 2!! Holy Ghost and all that isn’t!! That was amazing man!! Thank you so much for all the obvious hard work!!  

Joma

person JayDee
schedule October 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Scrolled down originals and saw this. The idea sounds like a heck of a lot of fun - did wonder, is it just the human woman in his life, or does Snowdrift exist in the parrallel too?

The sex scene with the Queen Mother was very hot, and I liked the whole no choice but to come in her bit, and her being unperterbed about having his kid.

I hope he gets the mortgage payment somehow though, that's gotta be a worry.

person Almighty
schedule October 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Continue it.

person Almighty
schedule October 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Continue this story, very well!

schedule October 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god 

that was AMAZING

You nailed it!! It was everything I wanted and more!!!  Thank you, my friend. Thank you thank you thank you!!!! Oh man...I can’t wait for the rest!!!

Joma