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by GeorgeGlass

person Yahegai
schedule April 8, 2023 at 12:00 AM

What a very amazing story with an amazingly happy ending. There was absolutely no shortage of hot sex in this story

person Yahegai
schedule April 8, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Yup still amazing

schedule May 10, 2021 at 12:00 AM

really glad Jomahawk's girl recommended this to me

schedule April 25, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Skitty and Joma, Chapter 9 

/Oh...My...God.

My thoughts exactly.

/Oh really?

Well not exactly.  More like "Holy shit holy shit that is so fucking HOT!"

/*giggles* you aren't alone there, Joma.  

/But seriously.  Jace described it perfectly.  This was a three ring circus of sex, with Jace as the X rated P.T. Barnum.  The epicenter of erotic delights.  The eye of the storm of sexy girls. The...

Thats enough, Skitty.  It was a literal cluster fuck, with Jace as the catalyst and primary pleasure pump.

/Yeah.  

I do have to applaud you, man.  There were a lot of moving parts with this, as well as a lot of body parts to keep track of.  You did an incredible job having everyone involved, as well as (mostly) making sure everyone got a turn with everyone else.

/And don't even get me started on that mating press.  Mmmm GOD.  That, hands down, was the best part of this finale.  In a way, what all this was building up to.

I personally liked how involved Moonbeam and Eclipse were.  How proactive they were in making sure everyone in their Royal Family was getting some kind of pleasure at all times.

I do wish we could have had Jace penetrate Angellica again.  Or have had the Leoprines give a "VIP" performance to her.

/Well, to quote Moonbeam, "things like this leave a girl...inspired."

You mean..?

/Oh yeah.  This story was nothing but the absolute HOTTEST and most well thought out piece of alternate world smut I've ever come across.  And there is NO WAY my filthy little mind was gonna be satisfied until I added to it.

/If thats ok with you, George.

I think I'm with you on that train of thought, Skitty.  This story left SO MANY avenues open to traverse.  Just what IS Duane's version of the Wishful?  What was Mrs. Vogle's like?  Possibly those of the many previous masters Valerius has served?

/Ohhhh, I feel a "Wishful: Expanded Universe" coming!

Wishful: Beyond the Coin.  The new-and-improved lives of those touched by The Wishful, such as Angellica and Alice going to school and not being able to go 10 seconds without thinking about what they want to do to Jace when they get home.  Or bringing Rosemary or Dominique into this sex circus!  

/I know Fairy already brought up that having the news chopper touch down in the Lynman's back yard would be weird, but I am totally seeing Jace doing some HUGE A/C job that winds up getting covered by the news, and who happens to be the reporter on scene? Dominique!  And she ends up interviewing Jace, and quickly comes to realize that there's a reason this handsome handy man looks so familiar.  He's the one thats been the at the center of the vivid and intense wet dreams she's been having for the past few weeks!

...Wow.  I honestly, truly never thought that my request for a guy who wishes for a world that lets him get as much pussy (or tail) as he wanted would evolve into this.  Something this deep, this...fleshed out as well as sexed up.  I'm honestly awed it wound up like this.  It's so much better than I could have ever hoped.

George, from the bottom of my heart, I want to say Thank You.

/Me too! Thank you sooooooo much for this incredible journey!  A journey, I hope, has many more adventures and stories to tell!

Again, and for the last time

/Again, and for the last time

Thank You.

/Thank You.

Jomahawk2694 & IttyBittyTittySkitty

person Marksman
schedule April 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Loved the story. Instant favorite. Any chance we might get a bonus chapter with the twins and one of the sisters? A little disappointed Angelica didn't get her turn with them.

schedule April 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Skitty Chapter 8

 

*sits there with smoke pouring out of my ears, trying to fan myself off*
Aaawooooooooo indeed! Holy moly!! Who would have guessed that real world Angelica would be an even bigger slut than her Wishful counterpart!  God that was HOT!!

Like, Wisfhul Angel's confession was so sweet and touching...but real world Angelica putting herself out there like she did just hit me different. And then being horny and energetic enough to ask for MORE after two hard, passionate fucks while Lady Angel could only handle 2...

And I'm pretty sure Jace just unlocked the ultimate magic by giving Duane the token. I refuse to believe you'd end this in a bad way when the whole point of the story is to make people (especially one specific person) happy. 
 

I can't wait to read the last chapter!

 

IBTS

schedule April 15, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Skitty Chapter 8

/WHOAH 

Wow. I knew you had been building up to Angel for a while, but this was beyond what I was expecting!  To have her go from so timid to "I literally live to be your cock sleeve" was giving me "Wedding Night" vibes but where the young girl was more than willing. 
 

Especially with her desire to be used brutally as well as he cherished. That really scratched my "hot but twisted" itch. 
 

I can see Joma's influence all over this, and I love how well you brought it to life. 
And the fact that the Magic of the Wishful is now applying to more than getting Jace laid is great!!  Seriously, this story has it all!

 

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schedule March 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Skitty Chapter 6

*skitty.exe has stopped working. Please reboot*
 

HOLY SHIT. YOU ACTUALLY DID IT!! You managed to work in King Jace fucking some of his chambermaids!!! And holy hot damn, this chapter was more like "Lemons lemons and more lemons!!!" 
I mean COME ON!! I don't blame Min for getting so flustered! The King has obviously been blessed by whatever Diety is responsible for sex in the Wishful!! 
PLEASE tell me those girls seek out Jace in the real world. If fucking Queen Mother Lara can make Laura Lyman have dreams that lead to her fucking her son, then an hour and a half foursome (that reminded me of the Aphrodite scene in God of War 3) should have those girls and that news caster DESPERATE to find Nace
 

And that Bombshell ending!  OMG I love this story so much!!!  
 

*skitty.exe has stopped working...again.*

schedule March 27, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Skitty Chapter 5 

Ohhhh!! You're clearly a cat owner. I could FEEL that feline defiance through everyone or of Pallas' actions. But once again seeing a high and mighty bitch be brought to heel on the massive cock of King Jace was JUST what I wanted to see. Quick question, just HOW substantial were those kitty titties?  A rough estimate of cup size?  (Purposefully ignoring the cliffhanger with someone spying from outside the window because I refuse to acknowledge that something bad might happen). And then Laura being a bigger slut for Jace's (newly, magically enchanted) massive cock than Alice was? God I want to see what her day at work was like with a gallon of her sons sperm sloshing around inside her. I loved this chapter so much.  Hopefully it won't take me forever to read the next one lol. 
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schedule March 15, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Skitty Review Chapter 3

So, our first taste of Angleica in the Wishful world.  That does sound better than "castle world" lol.  The bunnies reminded me of Lola Bunny from the ORIGINAL Space Jam, becasue we furrys don't talk about the new one.  It's really cool how well you can mesh funny and sexy, because I liked the public performance just as much as the private one! 

Well, not "as much".  There is no beating two sexy rabbit girls giving their king his due respect.  And that Cottontail special was STRAIGHT out of my deeper furry fantasies ;-)

And it looks like I was right.  Jace gets to "fix the problem" in the Wishful, and that also starts to "fix the problem" in the real world.  He plows the haughty Dutchess Rose in his castle, suddenly Rosemary is intrested in going out with him.  It's pure porn logic, and I LOVE IT!!

Hopefully the other pets get their turn along with Lady Angel soon.

I'm loving this so much!!

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