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for An Actor Abducted

by JayDee

person Jane
schedule June 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

that was really good

schedule October 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Augh! WS! But it's a credit to your writing that I didn't stop reading, and I was quite glad, too, when I saw what you had in store for Roman. I found it deeply satisfying when Gabrielle proved her mettle with sharp metal, although I most likely would have had the same response afterward. She really is my favorite character in this tale, and I really do hope you use her (or her AU version) in more stories!

And thank you for the shout-out, and the lovely compliments! I'm far from the best writer here, but I'm always happy when people enjoy my work.

schedule October 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Okay. Well.

I think the character I feel sorriest for is Gabrielle, who really, REALLY doesn't want to be there at all. And probably won't want to be there even more in Part 4. It's a testament to your writing skill that I'm actually feeling all sorts of squicked, given some of the stuff I read while sweeping, but there you have it. You've squicked the unsquickable me. O.O

The truth is, I'll read Part 4, and anything thereafter. I've got to know how Gabrielle fares.