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for The Evening Brews

by keithcompany

person JayDee
schedule August 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I remember Cubitt's Hysterical Literature thing. Amazing what art projects can do these days. Still on youtube!

Aunt Sally's marital history sounds pretty interesting. Thought I'd misread for a second there. Story on its own right to be told!

The oral sex while talking also reminded me of a couple 80s movies - Police Acadamy and the far less well known or funny Hamburger: The Motion Picture. Possibly not the mental images needed. It was pretty hot when she wrapped her legs. Happy ending for the virgin too.

Fun story, good use of the request and it's always nice to see requests getting picked up and written.

person TB
schedule August 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I enjoyed the chapter thanks

person TB
schedule July 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great first chapter can't wait to see what happens next