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for Crusade Gone Awry

by Tater-Chips

person Anon
schedule January 15, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Interesting back story. The story seems set up for Lionheart's down fall or is there a twist? The sex scenes are colourful (especially the puppet scene) Nice dynamic between Talia and Renard. My only critism is to watch for passive voice - replace was with a verb or abverb. Anyways, keep on writing!

schedule October 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

It is nice to see this post as these types of stories are really rare.

Really liked it and hope you can still update it.

schedule July 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I read this story when it came out years ago and was afraid it would never get updated, now I am so happy you are continuing the story and was delighted with the new chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how you incorporate more monsters into the story.