Interesting back story. The story seems set up for Lionheart's down fall or is there a twist? The sex scenes are colourful (especially the puppet scene) Nice dynamic between Talia and Renard. My only critism is to watch for passive voice - replace was with a verb or abverb. Anyways, keep on writing!
It is nice to see this post as these types of stories are really rare.
Really liked it and hope you can still update it.
I read this story when it came out years ago and was afraid it would never get updated, now I am so happy you are continuing the story and was delighted with the new chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how you incorporate more monsters into the story.