I do love the way you describe the fight scenes. I can picture every character's moves. Another great chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next :D
Firstly, this exchange had me laughing out loud.
“Him? You're kidding me, right? This… monster?"
“Um… right here."
Tey pointed a finger at Zack and shook his head.
“Don't."
Secondly, fang-face... Bahahaha! Gold!
I love the animosity brewing between Tey and Zack. I imagine this little reconnaissance mission is going to be peppered with snarky comments. I can't wait!
Ooo! Things are really ramping up! I always love your fight scenes, and now Zack and Tey have met, I can't wait to read what happens next. Will they fight? Will they join forces? Gah! I need to know. Great chapter, I'm sooo looking forward to the next one :D
Great chapter! I love that the 'suck heads' have an evil plan. Mwahahahaha! Human cattle, intriguing! So, Zack doesn’t feed in the traditional sense? He is reminding me more and more of Angel, and I like it. I can't wait to read what happens next :D
Poor Zack, my heart is breaking for him. Love the name of the club, by the way. Thanks for dedicating it to my favourite vampire :D I'm glad you gave a backstory into Zack's turning, I have a feeling I'm going to have a lot of empathy for him, much in the same way I did for Spike and Angel. All in all, you've piqued my curiosity. I'm dying (haha) to see how Tey and Zack meet. All in all, a great chapter. Two thumbs up!
Suck heads? Love it! Hahahaha. So, Tey is some kind of vampire hybrid, and a red-head to boot? Interesting. And The Master's feeding tube idea...classic. Who is Janet? Is she of importance or just another victim? I need answers! Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more.
Great first chapter, I loved the fight scene. Poor Tey, no wonder he became a vampire hunter. I'm curious to see how all this unfolds. Please don't leave me hanging! Huggles! x