Boy that escalated quickly.
Awesome chapter. Love it.
Derrick gets into situations he has no power over. This screams for drama. Plus if Jenna or any other girl/woman start to make him commit or make any serious move on him things will get wild. Can Avalon compete and give him what he needs? Can Derrick do the same for her?
I agree with WildNtwisted. Plus the writing style really is fun to read. I wonder what Avalons goals are with Derrick. Is he just her boyfriend Plus we got Jenna here too. She seem at this point very under developed.
Poor Dirk got sucked into the danger zone of seduction. Its like a mine field out there.
Nice Chapter. I wonder if Avalon is a bit jealous now that her boyfriend has another girl. Maybe a triangle relationship is just beginning to start.
The Alice reveal was a nice surprise. Is there a chance Derrick would try something with Alice as a distraction from Avalon? Or with any other milfs in his neighborhood? Keep it up. This has some awesome twist and turns.
Interesting story. Dont rush it. Keep this up. This has real potencial.
Very cute story so far! Looking forward to seeing where it goes