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for Crossing the Moon

by MichiTheThird

schedule April 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Wooo it was the god’s Crazy dead beat mom!!!! Never saw that coming. But I guess she would see that as good revenge against Set for loving someone other than her.

 

And Khonsu now knows about the boys!!! But has his own problems and leaves then alone. Hmmm maybe getting her getting pregnant from Anubis will break the spell and give her something to focus on rather than the boys!! Lol. 

 

I’m glad it’s not coming close to the end but just the close of the first part. I think I would cry if I had to say goodbye so soon!!!!

schedule April 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I love this story! Thank you. Keep it up!

person smint45
schedule April 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Amazing chapter!!! I really loved it!!! I hope that Anubis and Konshu will have their happy ever after too!!! Can't wait for the next update!!! See you next week!!!!

schedule April 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

And the plot thickens!!! Here I was kind of starting to hate Khonsu thinking she was a bitch to try to hurt her wolves and treat her mate like that. But now I am kind of feeling sorry for him/her. Clearly there is something wrong. Can’t wait for the next puzzle piece. 

schedule April 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I just want to ask here since I don't know where else to ask, but robin will you return to finish catching tavo?

schedule April 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thirdly: Greendragonsify, you would ask this under Catching Tavo, where Robin would not only receive a message, but also incentive for continuing it. I'm the one doing all the updates on our collaborations, since she's in the middle of hardcore midterms and chaos.

person smint45
schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

First I want to say that Robin you have my condolences I know how you feel. my Grandma who I loved very much passed away a few months ago.

Now on to the chapter. I really adored it we got to know so much!!! I really hope Konshu and Anubis make up so that they don't tier apart our sweet six!!!! Poor Eli I hope he will feel better after the run!!!! I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter!!!!

schedule April 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Wowza!! That is a lot of plot advancement. I love that Khonsu seems to have finally forgiven Anubis. Now the pieces of the puzzle making up the Gods lives is completely together. 

 

Aww I can’t wait to see them run in the moonlight together!! I think it’ll be cute. 

 

Condolences on your loss. 

person smint45
schedule April 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That was so amazingly hot!!!!! Perfect chapter!!!!

person smint45
schedule March 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh the sylph is so sweet!!! I hope Nut can help our mates^^ See you soon!!!