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for Crossing the Moon

by MichiTheThird

person smint45
schedule May 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was an amazing finish^^ I really loved this story and I'm happy that you posted this so consistently and fast!!!! So to answer Robins questions:

What did they like best? Very hard to say I really loved the bonding stone and the process opf finding each individual mate!!! And I loved the side story of Konshu and Anubis!!!!

Who were their favorite characters? I'm absoloutly on your side with Jany beeing the most amazing and sexy!!!! I loved the purple red eyes!!!! And I really took a likeing to Anubis and Konshu after he was himself again!!!!

Favorite scenes? I really liked the scene where Anubis went to his dads to get help with Konshu!!!! And I also loved the scene where they found January and of cause the scene when they rescued nono!!!! So hard to tell witch was my absoloute favorite!!!!

Things they didn't like? I really didn't like Konshu beeing so mean to Anubis when he was not himself!!! I know that was necesary for the story but it broke my heart that Anubis had to suffer so much!!!

Places that needed more detail or felt clunky? I had some problems to visualize Viktors mansion and the god realm so maybe a bit more details in those areas.

Favorite sex scene? Definitly the last one with the bondage and double penetration that was just sooooo HOT!!!!

Favorite pairings? So hard to say!!! I don't think I can decide^^

Anyway fantastic story!!!! Hope to read a new one from you both soon!!!!

schedule May 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awww kawaii.... hot damn ** nosebleed**, NOOO it can’t be over!!!! 

person smint45
schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That was a really sweet chapter!!!! I liked it a lot!!!!

schedule May 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awww so glad to see this couple again!! I was going to ask how they were. So glad they too found their mate. 

person smint45
schedule May 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really loved this chapter!!! And I found janys creativity with his powers amazing and hot!!!! Can’ t wait for more see you next week!!!!

schedule May 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg I’m so glad they are throwing Nolan’s abusive masters under the bus!!! He’ll  finally get some justice and be able to rest easier and heal. 

person smint45
schedule April 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That was absoloutly fantastic smutt!!!! I really adored it!!! I'm so glad konshu and anubis are together now!!! And I'm so happy for nono^^ He is just too cute!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! See you soon!!!

person smint45
schedule April 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sad to see that you disided to part the story :( But Still a few more chapters to go!!! Hope the wait for the next part after that will not be so long!!! Great chapter!!! I'm glad Ra steped in when he did!!! Otherwise it would have ended badly!!! Hope Konshu and Anubis will find their happy ending too!!! See you soon!!!

schedule April 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg!!! I did not expect Quin to be made a vampire!! And Eli is a favorite of Ra!!! Wow. Glad the God got there in time to save our boys. And shocking that Anubis’ mother is not punishing him for his father but his husband because she doesn’t like gay couples!!! Didn’t expect that! 

person smint45
schedule April 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter!!! I'm so glad that we are not at the end of everything jet^^ That was amazing!!! I hope anu will be able to reascue his love!!! Poor Konshu!!!! Hope they will find together again!!!! Can't wait for next week!!!!