As for sex parts there are a sex scene with Danny and Delilah, but its kind of brief and more of the tell-they-have-passionate-sex than show what really happen. As for the Debbie and Michel there is talk about them having sex but it is not shown to the reader. I would have expected lots of more sexual tension and passionate details with 4 teenagers are sharing a bed and walking around the house naked. It is also a bit let down that Michel is so easily distracted with Debbie after all the drama from the beginning of the story. I can most certainly accept that Michel must consider what Debbie thinks about her new boyfriend having the hots for his brother instead of just her, but it would work better if the reader are shown that Michel is making that choice, but lust for Danny when Debbie is not watching. It is a given that not every chapter can be an orgy in a plot based story, but it feels like potential here if the teenagers struggled with containing their libido.
The major action of the chapter is that the boys have to deliver their papers with their fathers weird restrictions about what to wear while using the bike. This works as awful as could be expected and in the end with blisters and pain when they are forbidden to use sensible footwear. The girls are with them and it turns less traumatic than expected. In the end the father drops some of the broken rules and he comes across as more like a human that did a bad judgement than the creepiness shown in the beginning.
One thing that surprised me is that it turns out Debbie is, in fact, older than Michel, despite her being in a lower year in school. It is not done like author-accidentally-made-the-girl-too-young, but it is actually a more well-thought-out story arc with her being held back by parents who do not care. Danny and Michel's father gets involved and arranges for Debbie to take an exam to skip a year so she can graduate at the same time as Danny and Michel. It feels like a pretty big part of the story is about a strict father, who might not always make the best decisions, but has a big heart and wants to genuinely pay it forward to society. The chapter ends with the father arranging a party to celebrate Debbie's success.
A possible negative for some might be a classic breaking-the-hymen scene, but as I read it the discomfort described is about the characters themselves believing in the myth about a hymen more than there being a real hymen that must be destroyed before a girl can enjoy sex.
This story begins with a good mini mystery about why the youngerbrother is causing trouble and creating conflict with the olderbrother. The reason I call a mini mystery is that the conflictbetween the brothers are not the bolts that keep the story together,but more works to setting up the scene for the later chapters. Theoutcome of the conflict is sexy and steamy provided you enjoy m/m sexscenes.
One thing to beaware of is that the actions of the father might require somesuspension of belief since he is acting kind of creepy. The leadcharacter gives some interpretations of what is happening that putthings in context, but he is not really aware of the why when thingshappen. Looking ahead at further chapters you eventually get prettygood explanations for the behavior of all the characters in the firstchapter.
Given the setup inchapter one I do expect later chapters to have lots of kinky good sexand my advice is to read the story and trust in that later chapterswill explain the things you might find weird in chapter one.
From a smut perspective there is no sex, but the setup for further chapter is "promising" when the brothers find out Danny's girlfriend Delilah have a younger sister that want to double date Michel. Realistic is perhaps not the word to think about when the girls agree to go naked inside the Dworak home in exchange of the chance to get to fuck the brothers, but Wilde Guess manage to get their reactions to feel grounded in their characters. It feels believable that they might have a background that makes the weird events happening at the Dworak house feel comparable safe.
Having read the first chapter, I admit I am now hooked on this story and am eager to read more. Daniel and Michael are an interesting pair of brothers and the incestuous love between them gives off a slightly demisexual vibe on the homoerotic aspect of their relationship that I like. Daniel's way of speaking is a bit on the robotic end, which has me imagine him usually speaking in a monotone; I do not consider this a bad thing and even encourage this as I see it as having his character with an interesting perspective. I can somewhat imagine their father's thoughts, him personally a little disturbed while watching his sons while also self disciplined enough to not cut things short just because he didn't like it. He's more accepting than most parents in that respect. All of the characters brought in for the first chapter are interesting each in their own respects. All in all, this story was well written aside from a few punctuations I found to be missing, namely ending quotations. I definitely recommend this story for those who aren't repulsed by incest and enjoy a good M/M.