Dude, you need to make a chapter 2.this is an incredible story and I need to read more!!!!
Short, sweet and to the point. A lovely concept, always been a fan of HumanM x OrcF. And with a breeding element tied into, great. Just the right amount of exposition for it to not get exhausting. Didn't take too long to get to the action. Which i believe could've gone for a little longer, it did seem no more than an apetiser for the next chapteres to come.(Hopefully.) Overall a pleasent read, not sure if abandoned or not, would love to get a continuation and will be patiantly waiting. Good job friend.
Honestly I was expecting this story to be disappointing because you haven't updated it in a while but it is exactly the opposite. I guess it does have the benfit of you being able to go all the way with your writing without having to worry about offending some part of a fandom.
I am looking forward to your next chapter
Honestly I was expecting this story to be disappointing because you haven't updated it in a while but it is exactly the opposite. I guess it does have the benfit of you being able to go all the way with your writing without having to worry about offending some part of a fandom.
I am looking forward to your next chapter
Cant wait for more
I really enjoyed this. The world had some interesting backdown details and the sex scene was pretty hot. Been a while since I read a story so it was nice to find this one while looking through for something to read.
This is awesome and I can't wait until he meets the orc that did that awful stuff to all of those humans! Surely he will punish her with that thing he calls a dick! I love how you are describing everything. Very good writing. More pleaseâ¤ï¸
This is interesting, I am intrigued!