Wait, how is this the last chapter? Are we getting an epilogue? A sequel? It can't just end right there! There's so much that still has to happen. Alan has to come clean with what he was told and they have to kiss and make up...
Uuuuuugggghhhhhhh I need to read more of this!!! It's so good and every chapter is a tease! I love it all though
Oh holy hell Batman!!! I love the whole chemical make up matchy thing...Very cool. And that's what was making them love each other too? So so sweet...They are literally made for each other. 'SIGH' I can't wait till they see each other...This was a bit of a cliff hanger... but a really good cliff hanger! Pleeease update soon! I gotta know what happens nextâ¤ï¸
I just about flipped a table in frustration when I realized that I wasn't logged in and couldn't review fast enough. I don't know when this one started, but I just read all six chaps and I am HOOKED. Can't wait to read more.
Ok, lemme try to leave a more SANE review after I got the pure excitement out of my system. I have my theories on what's going on, but I'm not gonna voice them in case they really end up spoilers. I swear I read like all six chapters in 10 minutes, I was so absorbed into it (ok maybe not TEN minutes, but it was pretty darn fast). I actually wouldn't have minded reading about his date (even a teeny tiny summary about it), since now I'm wondering just how far they DID go. I have lots of favorite parts, but the top two faves right now are: 1. Jeff's reaction 2. The fact that Alan thought to himself 'it's Jeff, my Jeff' even while he's going all 'WTF.' Friggin loved it.
Ohhhhh hells yes!!! I hope he tells Jeff he has always loved him ever since the first day they met and that he doesn't care what he is and he had to go on a date with someone else because...Well...What the fuck else was going to shake things up a bit and make Jeff tell him he loves him too...Because he obviously does!!! Awww I bet Jeff feels awful for the way that he "let the cat outta the bag" but he has to truly know deep down that Alan wouldn't care about that...They are 2 peas in a pod:) I am so happy to finally know what is kinda going on with Jeff but I bet he is really sad right now and it makes my heart break for him...please update when you canâ¤ï¸
Oh man I feel so guilty reading more of your amazing work becauze I'm such a shitty editor/beta/helper/friend but omg you have a gift and I'm addicted. This story is so good (like I knew it would be) and I can't wait to see how this one plays out. I hope everything is going well with your publishing!
Ahhh I'm loving this! I can't wait for the next update!! â¤ï¸
This is so much fun! I love the slow build and am dying like everyone else to know more about Jeff. I also really love their characterizations and the flashbacks. Flashbacks can be tricky, but they work really, really well here.
The tone is perfect, it reminds me of old Amelia Atwater-Rhodes books, like this would fit right in along side hers in the world she created.
Can't wait to read more!
Oh NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! That girl better not be fucking with them...He said she was always nice but asshole friends can pressure people into shit and if she was dating an asshole before and friends with people that were assholes...Maybe she has the asshole gene in there somewhere? And I wish something would happen with Jeff already!!! They are so in love and now this other guy is moving in on Jeff's territory...He seems nice but I already love Alan and Jeff together! I'm hoping something happens where Jeff has to come to Alan's rescue and...I don't know...Finally let me know what the fuck is going on with him!!! Anyway...Update soon pleaseâ¤ï¸