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for Salvation

by Sweetsong22

person smint45
schedule September 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sinese really tries to be frigid but you can see that he already likes Khrel quite a bit!!! Can't wait for his memorys to return!!! I'm so glad for the third update this week!!! Thank you so much!!!! See you soon!!!

person Tahn
schedule September 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Haha, winning over Sinese could be fun. For some reason I picture this huge demon holding a flower trying to get him to like him. Hahaha

person smint45
schedule September 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter!!! I'm so glad that Xiyo was able to rescue him!!!! Now he only needs to remember^^ But at least Khrel has his feisty human back!!! Can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!

person Tahn
schedule September 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonder if there's a code book for his functions. This is gonna be an interesting encounter.

person smint45
schedule September 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh I really like this new story of yours a lot!!!! I have a feeling that both Khrel and Thesus will not be happy when they see what happend to Sinese!!!! I hope there will be a way for the god like race to salvage his brain and personality somehow!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!! See you again soon!!!

person Tahn
schedule September 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That's horrible. I love his personality. Don't take his coolest feature away you evil, murdering, sadistic, psycho characters!

person Tahn
schedule September 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Uh oh. I hope he's gonna be ok. I do wonder though, how the big bad is gonna take someone damaging his toy.

person Tahn
schedule September 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This has an interesting start. Look forward to more.

person FJ
schedule September 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

A new story! Yay! Your story is great as usual. Cant wait for the next chapter.