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by Sweetsong22

person Antiki
schedule October 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yup you were defo right, I did enjoy this chapter! :D Love it how Xiyo stepped up to help with Sinese's turmoil and how he cares about his general. Wins the best leader reward for sure. ^^ 

person XiouSan
schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ohoho.... So the honeymoon has started. I wonder if Xiyo make a little prank to his fav General by adding more than immortality to Sinese? Hehehe...perhaps having mini Khrel & Sinese hybrid won't be bad side effect. Thesus would be happy to be uncle and Ophal can play nanny sometimes. Hahaha...my imagination gone wild

person smint45
schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh I missed a chapter!!!! That was really amazing I really liked how Xio rescued him!!!!! And the smutt was amazing!!!! Thanks for the update!!!!

person Tahn
schedule September 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So Sinese is a bit less than human. Will he gain other aspects, like wings?

person Antiki
schedule September 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am so glad to come across this story ^^ Really loving it so far, the characters, the setting, the development. All of it~ Maybe not the part Sinese was a slave in his own mind and that now he hates himself, hope he snaps out of it soon. I will be following <3

person Tahn
schedule September 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Uh oh. The shoe has indeed been dropped.

person Tahn
schedule September 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I hope this keeps going well, and the nightmare that is his life doesn't break him.

person smint45
schedule September 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sweet chapter!!! I really liked it!!!! Glad Ophal talked too much^^ It gave him the hint that maybe Khrel is not the cause of everything he forgot^^ Can't wait for more!!! See you!!!

person XiouSan
schedule September 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love your story so far. "Salvation" is one of my newest fav story. I like this kind on M/m type. Both seme & uke are almost equal and the are manly in their own way. I don't like the crybaby or the victimize type ukes. I like how you make their relationship develop, not just plain PWP like most slash stories. 

Keep it going..I"ll be waiting for every chapter. 

Thank you for your hardwork.

person Tahn
schedule September 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That could actually work against him though, f Sinese gets pissy about someone getting into his business, you know? Time will tell.