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for Yurusu

by vidalhbea

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schedule April 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

You made me cry! The ending was just beautiful. Thank you for taking me on this journey, it's one I will remember for a very long time. Huggles!

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schedule April 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Very sweet and tender. Nori is doing all the right things to win Saiai's heart, and most importantly, his trust. Looking forward to more :)

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schedule March 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I'm so happy for Daichi and Hanna. Daichi deserves to have someone who loves him in his life. He's been through so much.

As for Saiai and Nori, I think Nori is playing his cards in just the right way so as not to scare Saiai off. The lunch date was a simple yet effective way of getting Saiai's attention, and the flowers were a nice touch too. But I think he has his work cut out for him. Gaining Saiai's trust won't be easy and I'm curious how he will go about it.

All in all, another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Huggles! 

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schedule March 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Firstly, loved the reference to our favourite pirate, lol. I also loved the start of this chapter. Nori playing with the foam block evoked a lot of emotion in me. I hope Saiai forgives Nori sooner rather than later. Sora needs both men in his life, and I think it will also give Daichi a lot of peace, especially after suffering so much physical pain throughout his life. Even though this story is coming to an end, I'm still eager for the next chapter. I want to see Saiai and Nori together!

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schedule March 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was so good! I'm glad Saiai took Hanna back and Nori openly admitted he abused Saiai. I have a feeling the birthday party will be the catalyst for reconciling Nori and Saisai...at least I hope so :D I guess this story is coming to an end. I'm sad, I've really fallen in love with these characters.

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schedule February 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Gah! Just when I thought Nori and Saiai were about to reconnect. This little twist took me completely by surprise, I would never have guessed Hanna was employed by Nori. Now you've got me wondering how Nori will make things right with Saiai. Next chapter please! :D

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schedule January 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

What a twist! I would never have guessed Aki was responsible. The plot just gets better and better. I can't wait to read more :D

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schedule January 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

What? Nooo! What?! I DID NOT EXPECT THIS! You're messing with my head. I need answers!

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schedule January 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

As this is my first time reading an Mpreg story, I had to Google the whole Alpha/Omega dynamic. Fascinating! So, now I'm wondering if Saiai and Nori stay together and have a relationship during Saiai's pregnancy and then have a falling out or if their split happens immediately. Keep writing, I need to know!  

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schedule January 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Poor, poor Saiai. Things are going from bad to worse. I love how Daichi, although physically damaged, can find an inner compassion and sympathise with Saiai's plight. I'm still conflicted about Nori though. He's a complex character.

Thumbs up!

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