I really liked this chapter!!! I asume the flashback was ariels first life? That was really sad!!!! I wonder what the bitter taste in ariels blood is, I have a feeling that it is something bad!!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!
Oh I really love this story!!!! I liked the last chapter a lot!!! Hope the two of them will make up!!! So can't wait to see what will happen next!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
And another great chapter!!! I really like this so far!!!! See you again soon!!!
Fantastic start!
this starts promising!!!! I'd like to read more!!!! See you again soon!!!!