I really love this story, and I loved it from way back when it was around here. I am so delighted that you are rewriting it, and I am loving every part of it ^^ Sadly, I think I never got around to reading the completed version before I stopped visiting AFF some years ago, but that only means I am very excited to know what happens next with Micah and Talya! <3
Thank you for updating so quickly! I was very excited to see that you had posted a new chapter and read it right away. I really am loving the relationship between Talya x Micah....especially as the story seems to be heading towards a new phase where they aren't going to be marching along or in a camp anymore. I cannot wait to see what happens when Micah decides to either take him home or sell him ^^ I read the story a long time ago...so I think I recall where they head to next but I don't want to give away any potential spoilers. Thank you so much for taking the time to edit and re-upload this story. It's such a treat and your writing is excellent!
Yay, an update! Good chapter! :) I like how Micah is struggling with his feelings. I hope he gets a handle on them soon so poor Talya isn't so confused by the man. It seems Talya is just trying to please the man and be good so he doesn't get hurt, but then Micah's friends come along and Micah starts acting different and they hurt Talya anyway. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I am so tickled you mentioned me at the top of your latest chapter!! Of COURSE I left a glowing review! I have loved this story since it was initially posted a few years back. I am over the moon that you are editing and reposting it :) I am also surprised that more people are not reviewing this story - it is one of my favorites. I love the evolving relationship between Talya x Micah and cannot wait to see what happens as they just keep growing closer and closer! Thank you again for another wonderful update! You are a fantastic writer!
Wonderful update! It is nice to see a more tender side of Micah come out and see how he struggles with his emotions. It makes the character development very realistic and I appreciate that. I hope eventually he keeps Talya to himself and brushes off Jonah x Silas ;) I really enjoy the character of Seth as well and am curious to learn more about his past with Micah :3? I hope you update soon! I squealed with excitement when I saw this update! Thanks so much!!
I absolutely adore this story! It's completely captivating. The characters and their interactions are amazing. Really wonderful. I can't wait to see more. Xoxo Robin
Hello Drk Dreamer!
Thank you SO much for starting to re-post this story again! I was such a huge fan of this story when you originally posted it years ago. I was so tickled to come across it the other day. Your talent for creating such unique characters is very inspiring! I definitely enjoy the slow and realistic evolution of Talya and Micah's relationship. I look forward to seeing how you updated/revise this story as you go along! Good luck with your writing and I can't wait to see more updates! Thank you!!!
Thank you for another great chapter! Love Seth and Talya. Micah is interesting, I like learning more about him. Hope he starts treating Talya better soon tho. Poor Talya. Please update again soon!
This is coming out good ! It's silly ,but I found myself getting angry at Micah ,Silas and Jonah . More at Jonah for his behavior . He rapes and makes poor talya suck his cock and goes all "oh my god he's hurt ,poor guy !" After he hurts him . He knows what he's doing ,so he has no excuse for his behavior . He ain't stupid . Ad for Silas ,well I guess he just liked to hurt people. ,no surprise there . Then there's Micah . This guy must be bipolar or something! I actually kept thinking how would he like to have his nipple nearly bitten off ? And then Seth . I think he's my favorite aside from talya . I can understand his fear . I can't wait for the next chapter !
began to read it out of curiosity and got instantly hooked ! Hope to read more and see where this goes .