These chapters were amazing!! Thank you so much. I really love how everything is changing...and I wonder if Micah will change things for Talya too? Seeing Micah give Talya oral sex to help him really shows how he has grown and changed. But while I know they love each other, I think Talya deserves a shot at a better life, or even just a chance to experience more. I can't wait to read more and see how it all turns out. Your writing is superb.
I'm sorry to hear that this fall and winter have been tough for you :/. I really hope things start to turn around. Wishing you all the best!
I hope you can update soon! I'm dying for another chapter
Dying for the next chapter!! Hope it comes soon :D
I normally just read and not comment. I had to go through the process of registering to review but honestly when you read something as good as your story, i honestly do not mind.
This is, on another level, good! I hate these type of stories with the pain and all but you do it differently. Yes there is pain but also some amount of softness and love and ahhhhh I really love your story.
When are you gonna write more. Please I need more.
Yes!! Thank you for the double update!! Please update soon - I need to know what happens next. Your writing is truly amazing.
More great chapters of this great story. I'm sad reading about Talya's life in the kitchen, though. Priya is just mean and nasty. I'm really glad Trance is there to look after him. And Rael sounds like an awful person. He definitely has his mother's angry streak. I wonder if Talya's punishment was something Rael and Priya arranged before hand, and Priya was just waiting for Talya to mess up so Rael could get his hands on him. Those two make such an evil pair. Micah needs to keep a tight hold on Talya from now on, I think.
I was so excited for a new chapter...but wasn't chapter 13 already posted? I'm pretty sure I read it a while ago
Somehow I'm not surprised that Silas had something to do with Micha's injury. Talya made such a good "nurse" to his Master, and I could just feel the emoiton in his actions. Once again, another great chapter. :)
Great chapter! Hope you can update again soon
Wow, such a long chapter! But we learned quite a bit as Talya learned. Micah should really ignore what he should be doing, and how he should appear to his men, and just go with his gut when it comes to Talya. He clearly feels for the boy, and it just confuses Talya when he switches how he acts towards him.
Looking forward to more! :)